Write a short essay answering the following questions. Your essay should be 130-150 words long. In your essay you should answer the following questions.
1. Does life exist elsewhere in the Universe?
2. What three questions would you ask an alien?
3. Do you you think there would be any problems if aliens came to Earth?
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever thought about the Universe and existing of life out of the Earth?
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of Galaxies and we do not know for sure if life exists elsewhere in Universe. Majority of the space remains unexplored. However, most of scientists say that aliens are real and they can come to Earth. And they are trying to predict what happens if they come and emergence of problems with them many years. Nowadays, there are a lot of articles, films and creations about alien invasion, but in my opinion, it related to their goals of meeting our planet and how humankind reacts for them. If I had a chance to ask them three questions, I would ask firstly: where are they living? Secondly, how many planets did they visit? And thirdly, clarify what do they eat? In my opinion, these are the most important things to know about them. I understand that meeting aliens can cause a big war between humanity and aliens, but in my opinion, searching signs of life out of the Earth and be ready for finding it is better than do not do anything.
Hi, my friend!
Deletei think, it will be correct, if you put comma in cnditional sentences. Also it seems like you did not follow the construction of essay (introduction, main body, conclusion)
Hello! It was really interesting to read your essay. But, you should to correct your mistakes. For example, the phrase "most of scientists" is really strange. You can change it to "most scientists' or "most of the scientists".
DeleteHello, I really liked your essay. It was interesting and there were good 💡. However, there are some mistakes.
Delete1. It is better to write “the Universe”
2. Galaxies without capital letter( in the middle of the sentence)
3. “The” majority of the space
4. “The” Earth
5. It is better to use “might” or “may” instead of “can”
6. And they are trying to predict what “will” happen, if they come (there is a comma before “if” ). Also you should repeat conditionals. There is the first conditional.
7. article before “emergence”
8. And do not forget about the structure😉
I think it will help you. Good luck:)🍀
Today we will talk about different existence in Universe. There are many hypotheses about life existence elsewhere in our Universe. Somebody says that aliens are being from fiction books. However, I believe that life exists not only on our Earth, but there are many planets in Universe with their own existence.
ReplyDeleteRecently, I thought about what if aliens came to Earth. In my opinion, it will be really hard to find a language on which we will speak with them. If it possible I will ask them questions. First question will be about how they came to our Earth. Secondly, I will ask them about their technologies, which help them to travel in space. It will be interesting to know. The last question will be about the life-style and the nature on their planet.
Existence in Universe - Existence in the Universe
DeleteAbout life existence - about life exists
The First
Life - style - lifestyle
I agree with the previous user's opinion and I want to say about this sentence "I believe that life exists not only on our Earth, but there are many planets in the Universe with their own existence". I think, word "but" was unnecessary in this context.
DeleteIts good, that you used key words and I want to add that in the sentence "If it possible I will ask question...",there will be comma after possible)
DeleteThe universe is infinity large as long as it is have countless number of galaxies, systems and planets. Consequently, one of the planets can be like ours. Accordingly, are we alone in the universe?
ReplyDeleteWe have not the any evidence. So we can’t know for sure, and everybody can choose believe or not believe. However we can imagine what will be if we meet there. If I meet there I ask three questions. First, how they came to the Earth? Because I want know which technologies there use. Second, how did they know that we are on the Earth? I say in the universe countless number of planets, so I want know how they found us? The last, with what intentions are they come to Earth? For helping to develop or to capture there coming for ours planet. If there have technologies to travel on the space there have technologies to capture our planet and us.
However, I think humanity must be first who explore space and we must first found other types of life in the space. Moreover, we have all of chance, because we live in age of technologies progress and we want to start colonize Mars. I think It is first step to start age of space colonization.
it is have countless - it has a countless
DeleteWe have not the any - we have not any
can choos believe - can choose to believe
are they come - do they come
in age - in an age
We always need to put comma before transitions. For example: from your essay "However, we can...".
Delete"Because I want to know which technologies are they use" instead of "Because I want know which technologies there use".
If you want to tell us something about somebody's self, you will need to denote this object.
In this essay I am going to talk about facts related to existence of aliens, problems the human race might encounter in case aliens come to the Earth and three questions I am going to ask them.
ReplyDeleteAlien is life which does not originate from Earth. There are a lot of proofs that aliens are real. However, if aliens came to earth, I would ask them some questions. How aliens came to Earth? Maybe they have own spaceships or other means of transport. It can help our planet to advance our technology, learn something new. How many years they look for people? Maybe they gave us signals, but we did not pay attention to it or didn’t believe that this is really aliens. How many planets do aliens visit? Maybe there is not only one type of aliens; there could be life on other planets, too. If we asked these questions, we would know how many aliens are there in the world. We don’t know answers for these questions, yet. However, we can find out the answers in the future.
Of course, there may be some problems if aliens came to Earth. First of all, there can start war for our planet between people and aliens. Furthermore, there can be conflicts about developing of technologies or living aliens on Earth and people on other planets.
To sum up, coming of aliens to our planet have benefits and risks too.
1) related to existence >> related to the existence
Delete2) Alien is life >> Alien is the life
3) How many years they look >> How many years did they
4) First of all, there can start war for >> a war on
In the last sentence its unnecessary to use "of".Just "coming aliens"
DeleteThe majority of scientists state that life exists somewhere else in the Universe. They continue searching for new planets out of our solar system. Scientists explore and image these planets thanks to developing of technologies such as telescopes. This is what they do at NASA.
ReplyDeleteA human has walked on the Moon so he could be on the other planets too. If we were on the other planets we would meet aliens. We could know about their number, existence of another aliens and the ways we could communicate with them. Moreover, scientists have already send communication signals to the Galaxy. However, it might be dangerous because aliens may have no good intentions. In this case war for the territory will arise.
I think that searching for life in the Universe never ceases. If we found the signs of life it would become a discovery which will change the world forever.
1) of another aliens and >> another alien/other aliens
Delete2) have already send >> have already sent
3) In this case war >> In this case, war
Hello, Margo!
DeleteI've read your essay, it's nice. Howerever, we had to wrote about 3 question to aliens. Also, check your grammar
Hi, Margo😇
DeleteYour essay was interesting.
But pay attention on the next mistakes:
solar system= Solar Syrem
on developing= on the developing
other planets too=other planets,too
a comma before “because”
In this case war= In this case,war
Good luck 👍🏻
In this essay I am going to share with my opinion about existence of life in the space. The Universe is still something mysterious and unexplored, which humankind can not understand or find evidence. Space exploration has developed since 1961 successfully. However, there is no 100% guarantee that we could find other life elsewhere in the Universe.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is not just someone’s theory, it is an enormous possibility of it. Just imagine what if aliens come to Earth. It is fascinating, isn’t it? If I met an alien, I would ask him about his own life in the space. Moreover, our lives on Earth and on other planets are absolutely different, because the weightlessness of zero gravity in the space makes person’s action more difficult. Also, I would ask him that does exist other creatures in our galaxy except them. The last question would be about how long they are watching for people and where they are live, because the universe has numerous kinds of planets and it is interesting to be aware of how the aliens find Earth, where only exist life.
I think that if aliens came to Earth someday, it would be some changing in the whole world. Perhaps, the aliens would help us to develop our technology or start a war for the territory. However, it is still a large secret.
Hello!
Delete1)THE space.
2)It is correct, if you follow order of words in centence. For example, time (1961) is written last
3) put comma after "i think"
Hi! Your essay is very good1 Your ideas are clear and understandable. But it will be better if you correct your mistakes. I think you have to change this sentence: "Just imagine what if aliens come to Earth. It is fascinating, isn’t it? " It sounds really strange. You can write like that "Just imagine what will happen if the aliens come to earth?"
DeleteIn this essay, I would like to share my own opinion about existence of life elsewhere in universe. We are not alone in this universe. Many scientists are sure that this opinion is right. They believe that it exist another life in our world.
ReplyDeleteTo my mind, it is likely story. If they came, we could see them. However, it is a big probability that there is another life except ours. After all, everybody not once heard about air plates that flied around our planet Earth. It is a main proof of other civilization.
It would be interesting to see the aliens in our planet. If they arrived, I would like to pose some questions that are interesting to me. First of all, I wanted to ask about the image of life on their world. Secondly, it would be good to find out their average life span. My final question would be how they found our planet.
To my mind, if they came, it would be war of universe for Earth. Overpopulation expected in the near future in our planet, and it would bring the big problems related to resources.
In conclusion, I want to say that everybody must live on his own planet.
"It is a main proof of other civilization."-I think, there is a mistake in this sentence."It is a main proof existence of other civilization." This is correct version.
DeleteHello, good book. First of all I want to say thank you and you have done good job. However, there are some moments which you need to take into concederation.
Delete1. You often used simple sentences. Intstead of it, try to use linking words, it will bring color to your work.
2. In the beginning, you cannot say "to share with my own opinion". Just "to share with my opinion" because opinion is already yours or you can use "I would like to share with my point of view".
3. " However, it is a big probability that there is another life except ours." - "However, there is a big chance that - - "
4. "After all, everybody not once heard about air plates that flied around our planet Earth." - " After all, THE MAJORITY of us often heard different stories about air plates WHICH flieS around our planet", because you cannot be sure that EVERYBODY heard about it.
5. "My final question would be how they found our planet." - in this case you need use "my LAST question" and it would be better if you specifically indicated the question.
Have you ever thought about that there can be live somewhere in our Universe? That we can be not alone in this infinite space? Does life exist elsewhere in the Universe? I cannot state it for sure, but perhaps there can be something or someone humanity do not know about.
ReplyDeleteIt would be amazing to meet alien one day. I guess every person will ask a numerous amount of question from this unusual creature. However, I got only three. First of all, why now? I mean, humanity has waited so long. Why did they choose definitely this time to appear? The second question will be about their planet. Where are they from? I would like to know more about that extraterrestrial civilization. The last and the most important question is: Are there other habitable planets? I will ask alien about space and our Universe, it would be an amazing experience.
On the other hand, I think there would be problems if aliens came to Earth because they are unpredictable. Humanity does not know much about them so it would be really dangerous. I can never meet alien in my life, but I would like to.
The Universe contains billions of planets and stars. The Earth is only one planet in solar system , which has an air and water . But did you think about the other forms of life in infinite space.
DeleteIn my point of view, life is exists somewhere else in the Universe . I believe , that we are not alone in this world. In XXI century a lot of scientists exploring galaxy by using new technology. It means that in the future astronauts can see aliens, when they go out of our solar system . However, Aliens can find us before we did it. So it can bring some problems. For example, they can attack us or humankind get scared because they are not ready for seeing them. But if I look to another side, there are some benefits from them. The good relations between us is chance to pose about their life and living planet. First of all I will ask about their civilization. Secondly about how they lived before. And my last question will be about how they are using resources and where they are taking it because now we need them.
For conclusion I want to say that never-ending Universe has some secrets. And I guess the aliens are one of it. So in the future we discover it but today it is still impossible for scientists .
1.Commas must be used before and after "perhaps". (1st prgrph)
Delete2.I guess everyone WOULD ask a numerius amount of questionS (who?) THIS UNUSUAL CREATURE {without from}. (2d prgrph)
3."Definitely" is unsuitable in this context. (2d prgrph)
4."I got" is not academic phrase. U can say "I have only three questions to request". (2d prgrph)
5. The structure of scentence would be correct, if you wrote "Are there any other habitable planets?". (2d prgrph)
6."I would ask". (2d prgrph)
7.Comma must be used after the 1st part of Conditional scentence: "I think there would be problems(,) if aliens came to Eart because they are unpredictable.
8. Humanity does not know much about them(,) so it would be really dangerous. (3d prgrph)
9.Have you ever thought that there can be live somewhere in the Universe? (1st prgrph)
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ReplyDeleteDuring all history humanity has been interested in one question: what have in the space? After finding the answer, we have appeared new question. Does life appeared elsewhere in the Universe or we are alone? Religion denies this idea, but science agrees with theory about life outside Earth.
ReplyDeleteDespite my religion, I believe, that it can be life elsewhere in the universe, because as we now, there are more than 50 000 000 planets that we are discovering and a huge chance to fertility of new life.
I hope one day I will meet an alien and talk with him because in this case I have few questions to him. First of all I will ask about their planet. It’s really interesting for me their planets ecosystem and location. My second question will be about their history. How they were appeared in Universe and how they lived before this century. And my last question will be about, would they like to be our friends or they want something else. I think, they want to be our friend, because we can exchange with our technologies and progress together.
On the other hand, It can be a lot of new problems with their coming to Earth. It may start the lack of energy and place or food. In addition they may not be able to adapt to Earth.
To conclude, if there is a life outside Earth, we must to create friendly relationship with them, because they may solve a lot of our problems.
Hello Good boy! You did an awesome job! However, there some mistakes in the essay:
Delete1) we have appeared new question= appeared new question for us.
2) can be a lot of = can bring a lot of
3)it may start= it may lead to the
4)To conclude= In conclusion
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ReplyDeleteIs the Earth unique? Since the first man went into space, the universe became a riddle for us. Most of scientists suggest that life exist elsewhere in our never-ending Universe. However, others argue with this statement referring to discoveries.
ReplyDeleteNowadays, researches can not answer to the question because of lack of knowledge related to the Universe. Nevertheless, the chance meeting with an extraordinary creatures would be amazing. Owing to aliens , we would have an opportunity to solve actual problems asking their solutions. If they visited the Earth ,I would inquire some questions related to them. My first question would be like that “Where are you from?”, because they might be from another planet, which we don’t know. The second question is “How many intelligent civilizations do you know on other planets?”. The last question is “Which type of technology do you use in order to fly?”. It would be interesting to compare with our rocket.
In my opinion, aliens will help us to advance our technology and knowledge. Maybe, they know about world more than we.
to the question>>>the question
DeleteHi!
Deletewhat about grammar that we passed ---clauses os result
In many cartoons and sci-fi films aliens had shown us as dangerous, odd and smart creatures. And a lot of people create false impressions about aliens. But what if they are not clever, not insecure and strange?
ReplyDeleteWe don't even know anything about their existence. Do they exist or not?
If we start thinking logically, aliens must exist somewhere on the universe. Yes, we don’t have any facts that prove our opinion. But there is a lot of space in the cosmos and earth is tinier than a dot on the galaxy. There must be a place like earth where aliens can live. It will be cool to meet aliens and make economic contracts, exchange currency, trade and so on. If I would meet them, first of all I’ll ask them about place where they live. I want to know more about the planet where available criteria of living in. Second question would be about their culture, because I must admit their custom. And the last question will be about their hobbies, because maybe I don’t know some interesting actions and like that.
I would like to meet aliens, but I don’t expect them on earth, because there are no available places for them to live. Maybe in far future they can visit earth and let us look around in their planet too.
1) had shown us= had been shown to us
Delete2)on the galaxy= in the galaxy
3) where availabe criteria of living in= where living is available
4)Suggestion: use new vocabulary related to space
Universe never ceases to amaze us with its boundlessness. Maybe somewhere far away from our Earth, there is another planets, where exists life different from ours. Despite the convincing evidences, there are lots of people, who believe in existence of aliens.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I doubt the existence of aliens in the Universe since humankind already checked one third of Universe by hand-made satellites. But I’m not denying that another life might exist in another part. Furthermore, if I ever meet an alien, I would like to ask it three questions that make me curious about them. I would pose it these questions: “Do you know about location of other aliens in the Universe?”; “How our technologies differ from each other?”; “Would you like to cooperate with us?” Additionally, there may be some conflicts with aliens, if they came to Earth. Maybe they would be too overbearing and would try to snatch our planet from us.
In sum up, I want to say that existence of aliens in the Universe is quite doubtful information. However, meeting with them would be really gripping experience for humankind.
I liked the way you used the linking words and new words relating to the topic. There are my recommendations for you:
Deletethere is another planets -> there are another planets
where exists life -> where life exists
there may be some conflicts with aliens, if they came to Earth -> some conflicts with aliens would arise if they came to Earth (it is second conditional and we do not put a comma before "if")
humankind already checked one third of Universe by hand-made satellites -> scientists had already checked one third of the Universe out by artificial satellites (it is better to write like that)
Maybe they would be too overbearing and would try to snatch our planet from us -> Perhaps they are overbearing and will try to weed away our planet
Please do not ask questions in your essays and do not start a sentence with "but"(write "on the other hand" instead).
In this essay I am going to talk about existence of other lives in the Universe and why I think so. In addition, it will content what I would ask an alien, if I met s/he.
ReplyDeleteUniverse is something that is mysterious and even today when modern technology helps us to broaden our horizons, humankind does not know enough about it. So, it is unknown does there exists life elsewhere in the Universe. However, despite the lack of tooltip about presence of any other life, I can argue that we are only there according to my sense. In my point of view, if there is life in space, aliens would have explored an environment around them, so that we detected those inhuman creatures.
Although, when I meet an alien, I will have asked several questions because I do not want miss my chance. First will going to be like this: “What are you going to do on the Earth? ”. Second is how does look like the world where they live. At last I want ask them are they doing to show us their planet or planets.
So, according to how aliens which visited our planet look, I believe that they are not going establish any problems. As it says “If you think positive then positive things will happen”, it really works. Instead of problems it would be okay, if aliens came to Earth to enforce some changings in beneficial way. In this case, world will be developing thanks to aliens.
I am going to talk about existence - I am going to talk about the existence
Deleteit will content - it will contain
alien, if I met s/he - alien if I met s/he
Universe - The universe
about presence of any other life - about the presence of any other life
I do not want - I do not want to
First will going - First will be going
At last - At last,
I want - I want to
Instead of problems - Instead of problems,
changings in beneficial - changing in a beneficial
world will be - the world will be
Life, far away from our lovely planet, somewhere in another galaxy, or even universe, where somebody living by their own, better than us or even worth, having own notions about rules, moral qualities, life principles.... that's sound a bit insane, don't you find? Besides we get other problems to solve, questions, which should go first. But still we don’t stop thinking does life exist elsewhere in the Universe?
ReplyDeleteSo, does life exist? We can only predict. Even so feel free to let your fantasy blow up. And I know one TV channel that handle with this job right. Yeah, you have already guessed I’m talking about “РЕН ТВ”. What about my opinion, I only can say I don’t try to fill my head with this, but even though I believe and I would see and meet them (of course only if it won’t threaten my life(but I think they won’t even ask me(…whatever))).
In case I meet them, I, however, like the rest, would ask some questions. First of all, I would ask - why exactly we? I mean, there are numerous of others, although it is my second question – is there any other existence? Finally, the last question is - why? Why did they come? What’s their reason? And suchlike. I mean, what are their intentions. None of us would like, if they come to colonize or even destroy our planet. Maybe they didn’t like films, where we are killing them, but I think, it is completely another story…
1-what about comma after "besides"?
Delete2-follow the structure of an essay because, i think, you missed conclusion
1) handle with this job right= handles this job rightly
Delete2)can say i dont try = can say that i am not trying
3)didn't like= don't like
4) use new words related to space unit
Hello "Leviathan"! Yes, I know that is little things, but there will be three dots instead of four))) Good luck. Nice job
DeleteThe Universe is mystical place where there a lot of planets and stars. For humanity, space remains are unexplored, because of the secrets of it. We know a lot of legends and myths about space, for example, about aliens. But how did these legends appear? Maybe, all stories about it in fact are true. Unfortunately, we are not sure about it. But this does not prevent us from imagining about alien beings.
ReplyDeleteThe Earth is only one planet which contains all conditions for human life and it doesn’t have hostilities. Despite this fact, we suspect that there are other planets whose conditions are convenient for other creatures not for humankind, for example, for aliens. What happen, if we meet aliens. If I be able to meet them, I ask some questions. Firstly, I want to learn their language. Secondly, I want to know about their planet and how they survive in an endless galaxy. In the last, I ask their helps to explore the Universe. In my point of view, if we respect and create friendly relationship with them, there’d not be any problems with aliens.
To the conclusion, I want to say that we need to live in harmony with our galaxy and with inhabitants of it. Also, we should explore the Universe to broaden our horizons
1-i think, it is not necessary to put comma after "for humanity"
Delete2-what happenS
3- "i ask their helps"--> i ask their help
Space exploration began in ancient times and continues these days. Each times it possible to learn more and more about it. I can say that it broadens our horizons. Nowadays, scientists are researching the Universe and any signs of life on other planets. But, the results are not satisfying. Many experts came into conclusion that life does not exist elsewhere in the Universe except Earth. There are a lot of reasons which gives us the explanation of it. First of all, other planets are too far or too close to the Sun. Therefore, it might be adverse temperature for life. Secondly, other planets do not have an atmosphere like Earth, so there cannot be any water or air.
ReplyDeleteAlthough people and animals cannot live in different parts of the universe, but there may be aliens who live somewhere in space. It never ceases surprising me and I often think about it. Despite the fact that there is no reliable information about their existence, it is possible that they also live in unknown planet. If I met them, I would like to ask some questions. For example, I really want to know about their life. I would like to ask them “Where do you live? And how did you find the Earth? How did you come here? Did you use any spaceship or other type of the transport?” I think knowing more about them is interesting not only for me but for others too.
In my point of view, it would be a few problems if aliens came to Earth. We do not know who they are and what are they want from people. We don’t know anything about them. Also, this can lead to misunderstanding due to language barriers. It will be difficult to communicate with them. Therefore, that is the main problem of coming aliens to Earth
Hellooo friend. Your work is amazing, ideas are clear. but, unfortunately, you have some mistakes. In sentence "Did you use any spaceship or OTHER TYPE of the transport?" you should write "other typeS" or "ANOTHER type". Also, we didnot say "each times". there will be "each time". Thanks for your job)))
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ReplyDeleteOur universe is infinite. Our scientists have explored only 10 percent of the entire universe. We do not know what are happen outside of our galaxy. May be there are new civilization , however we do not know.
Nowadays new space technology give us an opportunity to explore the space. 60 years ago we did not have any idea concerning our galaxy but today our astronauts spent the years in the space by exploring new places and watching the earth. Today the majority of people and scientist wondering if there is life in space. Are there aliens? Or other humankind?
If there are aliens , I would like to ask some questions , which are related to our planet. My first question is :
1) Where were you until this day?
2) Did you know about us ? our civilization ?
3) What are you going to do and where are you living?
I think if their plans include visits to our planet, I would be against it, because I would not want them to invade our planet. However , it is impossible. So , we need to hope .
hello "fatcatdog". Good job, but unfortunately you have some mistakes. you forgot to write "civilization" in plural. also, I think, there will be "what IS happenING outside of our galaxy" instead of "what are happen outside of our galaxy"
DeleteHello, fatcatdog!I think, "Where have you been until this day?" is better suited by this time
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ReplyDeleteFast internet, thousands of channels of TV, the most helpful online maps as well as other stuff is encircling people of XXI century. By hard work of thousands and more scientists, engineers, astronauts, other specialists we can use all this technologies. However, this all became true only by space exploration`s encouraging. Would we live like this with everything we want by telephone`s functions or other actions what was magic in opinion of ancestors if the sky didn`t attracted them?
ReplyDeleteSpace studying made a contribution to the development of whole world. Also today that company or country that explored space more and have better tech are more developed and much stronger in fact. They have military, diplomatic and administrate vantage than others. For instance, USA can use Internet technologies at maximum, or Russia is more powerful than Kazakhstan and many more.
Moreover, today everybody on Earth see enormous opportunity in the space exploration. Shortage of space, mineral and organically resources are making us to leave our home and get away to other planets in opinion of billions of planets. I am sorry to bring you down with a bump, but you all think about break out from our poor planet, but what you going to bring to the new colonies? What did we can do by a vast amount of money that we spent in these researches? Today our home, Earth is in difficult situation; everywhere people are suffering due to violence, baby death, location war conflicts and other terrible things that never long last their decisions. Instead of cease this all and make them disappear off the face of the earth, we are soaring in the clouds and trying to run away from our problems that we need to solve while new problems are emerging again and again.
In conclusion, I want to say that we need to hit the hay, think one minute and try to find solution of million problems that appeared for a long time. Which making our work much harder in society, economic, ecology, education and other terms attacked by these diseases. However, I do not want to secure our technologies and science. I am willing to clarify that we need to be responsible and temperate in space exploration, but also we need to think firstly.
Hello, Smart Wood.
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing. However, I think there may be some mistakes in your work. For example,
"you going to bring to the new colonies"-you are going to bring to the new colonies
"What did we can do by a vast amount of money that we spent in these researches?". I think this sentence is incorrect, I woluld suggest you to improve it.
Thank you!
Space exploration
ReplyDeleteThere has been considerable debate among people over whether the life exists elsewhere in the Universe. Some advocate the theory of impossibility of life, except those on Earth, as there are inappropriate conditions for it. Others object to it, arguing that there is a high probability of being aliens at another point in the universe. While it is important to acknowledge that there are compelling arguments on both sides, I would suggest that humanity always should be prepared for an emergence of aliens. In this essay, I will outline three such responses.
From my point of view, we are not alone in our universe. Moreover, the life could have arisen on at least one of the billions of planets. Therefore, we must be prepared for their appearance. There are lots of dreamers who want to get meet with aliens from other planets. As for me, then I would like to ask some questions such as “What kind of civilization do you have on your planet?”, “Can you take me with you, please?” and “What technology did you use to come to Earth?”. Repeated remark of the UFO in all corners of the world, again, makes us believe in existence of aliens.
If aliens came to Earth, I would suggest that there will be several conflicts with them. There is no guarantee that they are such intelligent as humans, so they might lead to annihilation of life on Earth. Not only, are they dangerous for taking lives of millions of people, but also they are dangerous in terms of capture of the whole planet.
To sum up, in my opinion, space exploration can give both negative consequences as well as fruitful achievements. In this case, it is true to not limit opportunities of the universe, because we never can be confident about the future.
Hello, _lollipop_ , I liked your essay, you have wide vocabulary. I didn't find spelling mistakes. But, please, check your punctuation and sentence structure. I liked structure of the essay
DeleteGood job, my friend. I noticed a mistake here "at another point in the universe". To my mind, it would be better, if you wrote like "at ather points of the universe"
DeleteHello, my friend
DeleteI enjoyed your essay.
It was really interesting to read
However, there were some mistakes:
1. those on THE Earth
2. the Universe
Just pay attention on articles and capital letters. And your essay will be perfect 👌🏼
Good luck 🍀👍🏻
Modern technology gives humanity big opportunity to explore not only the earth, but also to go beyond it. Scientists carry out numerous studies that help to find out more information about our planet and space, atmosphere, the universe and the whole galaxy.
ReplyDeleteHowever space still remains an unsolved mystery.
Despite the ongoing researches, many people are still tormented by the question: Does life exist elsewhere in the Universe? In my humble opinion, there is a life outside of the earth about which we do not know. These could be aliens, creatures that look like humans and animals, or an unknown population. The chances of meeting aliens are equal to one in a million, but if I had the opportunity, I would ask them these three questions: 1) Did you know about the existence of another planet like Earth? 2) Where did you come from and how many of you? 3) Is there another life in space?
If aliens exist, they will undoubtedly be interested in our planet and people. However, I do not think that humans and aliens can have any problems. After all, if they wanted to capture us, then they had many centuries to do so.
In my point of view a high level of intelligence and human development will not allow people to enter into conflicts with aliens,so we need a lot of time or centuries to find out the answers to these questions.
Hello, Freya.
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing. However, I think there may be some mistakes in your essay.
"help to"-"help"
"gives big oppurtunity"-"gives a big oppurtunity"
Thank you!
Hello Freya! I think your duetions are not logical. For example, your first question is "Did you know about the existence of another planet like Earth?" And I think "planet like Earth" means planet with life. Because there are lots of planets like Earth but without life. If it's what you say, so your 3-rd question is the same with 1-st.
DeleteSo in the end you will lose your chance to ask 3 quetions(Because you will get the same answer to 2 questions).
Space
ReplyDeleteNowadays, the role of space exploration in our lives is difficult to overestimate. By investigating the space humankind is evolving to a new level. It gives us a chance to learn about the planets of solar system, stars and meteorites. Moreover, we can be aware about the Galaxy and Universe. Space exploration is an immense opportunity for the human race to broaden our horizons and be presented with unlimited possibilities.
The most thrilling question of all people and scientists is “Does life exists elsewhere in the Universe?” Certainly, everyone has their own opinion and speculations about it. However, that is still unproven. For somebody other life in space can be a made-up character. In my point of view, somewhere in galaxy there is another life in the Universe. In addition, they are substances that have very high intellect, own mindset, language and planet. In my imagination aliens are very tall and strong, with unusual faces. Furthermore, their biological life cycle is different from ours.
Still, if I have met the alien I would like to ask about their life on another planet. Because it will very informative for me to know about their lifestyle. Secondly, I would like to clarify about their ways to contact and communicate with each other. It can be their languages or special signals. I also like to learn their lives in space, can they breathe, or whether their organism capable to stay without air.
In my humble opinion, if aliens came to Earth, it eventually brings some problems, such as extermination for the medical purposes or for the learning. Otherwise war can start here. People can go against to the aliens to destroy them from the face of the earth. Nevertheless I would like to hope for the best that humanity and aliens will cease that problem, and a certain mutual a respect.
In conclusion I want to say that space exploration is developing with the rapid pace. The human race enhance to a new step. We can learn more about the Universe, and use our opportunities. In present situation we do not know about the aliens and other life, but in nearer future we can communicate with them.
Hello, Cooper.
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing. However, I think there may be some mistakes in your work. For example you did not put comas after such words as "Inconclusion", "nevertheless", "otherwise"
Thank you!
Currently, there are a lot of conversations related to existence in the Universe. Some people argue that there’s no life in other planets, except Earth, whereas others are confident that there is existence in the Universe, because we didn’t explore most parts of it.
ReplyDeleteEven though we don’t know is there any creatures in the Universe except us, we have to be ready to encounter with other civilizations, because it would convey a big quantity of alterations to our life. If I would have an honor to be representative our planet in negotiations with aliens, the first question I would ask, if aliens had come to our planet is “how they identified the location of Earth and were able to come to our planet?” because, obviously creatures that could get to Earth must have technologies which are more developed than ours. And the last question I would ask them from which part of the Universe they are and what their purpose of making their way to our planet is. Creatures from outer space may have good intentions such as making contact with unfamiliar species or they would try to colonize us. That’s why it’s important to identify their goal.
In conclusion, I think that there will be some problems with aliens if they get to Earth, as I said before it’s all depend on their intentions. If creatures from another planet have only peaceful aims, it will be good for us, otherwise if they don’t have such aims, it will be hard to confront them, because apparently, creatures that have opportunities to travel throughout the Universe have all chances to conquer us.
hello my dear friend !
DeleteGood job, but after 'otherwise' you shoul put comma))
also after word "obviously" you forgot to put comma
DeleteSince time immemorial, humans were interested in searching of extraterrestrial forms of life, and questions like “are we alone in the universe?” always triggered big disputes, because the universe is too enormous to answer these questions with confidence. However the majority of space researchers believe that in universe besides us there is a lot of other civilizations and interaction with them could be useful for humanity.
ReplyDeleteThey argue this by saying that in universal sizes even if it is very and very small chances of something, in reality they becomes to big numbers. For justifying, we can say that chances to meet other civilizations on other planets is 0.000000000001 percent, for example, but we can surely know that in universe exist more than 1,000,000,000,000,000,000 planets. As a result, we got 1,000,000 planets where we can expect aliens or even more. By this we can realize that chances of alien are exists more than the majority of people can expect.
In addition, interaction between two civilizations would bring new experiences for both sides. By sharing and extracting each other’s knowledges, technologies and experience, both forms of lives can develop as a whole civilization and respectful relationships between them could bring prosperity for their worlds. The most important things that we should ask them are: their achievements; their technologies; their source of energy. These three things, in my opinion, are the most important, because in view of recent changes in our world’s condition as ecology, it would be great if we can learn how to get energy without harm to environment. But it is only in best case. In worst, the war will end only with destruction of one or either sides or defeated will serve to winner as a slave.
In conclusion, I want to say that extraterrestrial form of life exists and our relationships with them can help us to develop, however there also may be a war, which we should avoid. But anyway, it is better than just isolate ourselves from external space, I think.
However - However,
Deletein universe - in-universe
in reality they becomes to big - in reality, they become too big
planets is 0.000000000001 percent - planets are 0.000000000001 per cent
By this - By this,
alien are exists - alien have existed
In addition, interaction - In addition, the interaction
other’s knowledges - other’s bits of knowledge
prosperity for their - prosperity to their
them are: - them are
because in view - because, in view
harm to environment - harm to the environment
But it is only in best case. - But it is only in the best case.
In worst, the war will end only with destruction of one or either sides or defeated will serve to winner as a slave. - In worst, the war will end only with the destruction of one or either sides or defeated will serve to the winner as a slave.
Nowadays, science and technology are developing so rapidly, a lot of opening such as artificial intelligence, augmented reality not surprise people, but news about space and universe people are waiting with enthusiasm. Like everyone else space and aliens interesting for me. I think that life exists elsewhere in the universe because there are many galaxies and planets that have not been explored yet. Recently NASA noticed signal and in their opinion, it was made by someone. Also, I believe that sooner or later we will meet with other life, and probably they will look like us. If I had a chance to ask them questions, I would ask like “where are you living?”, “who are you?”, “how you identified the Earth?”. There are a lot of movies, books where humanity fights with aliens. However, there would not be any problems and war if aliens came to Earth, because we will find the mutual language and live peacefully.
ReplyDeleteHello! I liked your essay and your idea. However, I have several suggestions for improving your essay:
Delete-“Discoveries” instead of “opening”
- “Space and aliens are interesting for me as well as for anyone else.” instead of “Like everyone else space and aliens interesting for me.”
-“Moreover, I believe that we will meet life out of the Earth before long and probably these creatures look like people.” sounds better than “Also, I believe that sooner or later we will meet with other life, and probably they will look like us.”
-Try not to use the word “like” in your essay. (If I had a chance…ask like…)
-You can write “and” before the last question
-“…movies and books…” sound better than “…movies, books…”
-You should write a conclusion, because your essay is incomplete.
I am waiting for your improved version. Good Luck!
Hello TheKing! Your grammar was marked by Hannah, so I would like to assess your essay idea. First of all, why don't you leave links to research? I think it will be very good if you have some proofs. Secondly, I advice you to justify your opinion(" there would not be any problems and war if aliens came to Earth"), because in your essay the is only one justified thing("...because there are many galaxies and planets that have not been explored yet")
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Nowadays there are lots of theories about life exist elsewhere in the Universe and Aliens. One part of scientists say about Life exist in other planets or ina other galaxies.one of the theories is , this: Thanks to the images and data collected– and by telescopes, both on earth and in space – we now know that billions of years ago, Mars had the three critical ingredients for life. It had an abundance of the chemical building blocks, liquid water on its surface and an energy source (volcanic activity) to power the chemical reactions that make life possible. The search for Martian life is ongoing, with a further three missions to Mars planned to launch over the next few years. Longer-term, a number of space agencies are also aiming to collect samples from Mars and return them to Earth for more in-depth analysis. And the search for signs of extraterrestrial life is stretching to the depths of our solar system and beyond.
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Deleteyour essay is interesting, but you have mistake in a word "ina". you forgot write it apart))
I learned some new words from your essay. There are "ongoing", "in-depth" and "extraterrestrial". However, I think that usage of "And" at the beginning of the sentence is a mistake.
DeleteWe are living in the solar system, which is placed in the Milky Way. Our sun is so tiny in this Milky Way that we can assume the existence of another life.
ReplyDeleteMost of us imagen aliens as a creature with a huge head, big eyes, green skin and four fingers on their hands. What if they exist but we can not see them with the naked eye. It means that the creatures we had imagined all this time can turn out to have different form, type, shape or even different body . If one day we are going to find out that aliens are real, would be interesting to know: Did they look for existing life in the Universe too? Did they try to contact us? If yes then how? And last one: What is their objective of visiting our planet?
Right now nobody knows are aliens exist or not, but we are going to find out it in future. Because of that humanity does not know their real purpose, we can not predict what is going to happen, if aliens would came to Earth.
Hello, lazy copycat.
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing. However, I think there may be some mistakes in your work. These are my suggestion of improving your essay
"Imagen"-Imagine
"Right now nobody knows are aliens exist or not"-Right now nobody knows whether aliens exist or not
Thank you!
In this essay I will try to discover answer to basic and unanswered question “ Does life exist elsewhere in the Universe? Presently less than 50% of the universe has not investigated. And we have no right to make conclusions about the existence or non-existence of life in infinity space. We can just predict. Some people think that we are not alone in galaxy, whereas others believe that we are first and last planet where life is exist. Let’s imagine, what will be the first question to aliens if there are get to Earth? I would ask about life in their planet, how they are live and what is the differences between our and their planet. And most important question how they found our planet? I think that to discover about existence of life in space, firstly, we must explore our planet. Because, I think that all answers here on Earth, we just need to investigate carefully. Because of the appearance of aliens in our land , there is will be problems. All depends on their aims, we should find with what purpose they hit the Earth.
ReplyDeleteHello, cuttie dreamer. I read your essay and I found it very intersting, you have very good ideas. However, I have some recomedation for you:
Delete1. Life is exist. – life exists
2. What is the differences between our and their planet. - What are the differences between our planet and their planet are.
3. Do not put “dot” before “And”, you should finish your sentence
4. Please divide your essay into paragraphs
5. You can use “In my mind”, “In my opinion” instead of “I think”
6. Use linking words. Because -> Due to the fact that, Therefore; And -> Furthermore, Moreover.
It is all, have a nice day♥
Should money be spent on space exploration?
ReplyDeleteWith the development of technology, the knowledge of humanity is replenished every day. If before knowledge of something outside their own country seemed incredible, now people know a lot about other planets except Earth. However people are not going to stop at this. Therefore, the government allocates a huge amount of money for research of the space.
In some cases, learning more about space is not only beneficial, but also useful. First of all, it gives us an opportunity to develop astronomy. This field is gaining popularity nowadays and it is in great demand among young students. First of all, study of astronomy allows us to improve medicine. For instance, The International Space Station has created many medical innovations. An example of this is a device which allows transmitting ultrasounds results across thousands of kilometers. Improved medicine will save millions of lives and emit the most serious diseases. Moreover, humanity need spare sources of raw materials that will soon run out in our planet. There is gold, silver, platinum and other significant metals. It is important to note, that lack of these raw material is becoming a quite actual problem these days. Thus, by listing some advantages of space exploration, I wanted to say that government really needs to spend money on it.
Nevertheless, thinking about space exploration still causes many suspicions. The problem is in huge amount of money. Space exploration is undeniably costly. Training and educating astronauts, building rockets and space shuttles, developing new technology for space missions — all of these cost a substantial amount of money. It also leads to pollution in space. After all, the universe is vast and infinite, and it would take billions of years to fill it with junk. But that’s the thing: even if it wouldn’t fill up right away, it can still be polluted with the debris that space missions leave behind, such as satellites, rocket launch boosters, and other kinds of equipment.
To sum up, I want to say that it Space exploration is one of the biggest achievements of humans as a whole, and it has paved the way to greater scientific understanding and many technological advancement over the years. However, it can’t be denied that it also has several drawbacks, which is why governments and scientists should find a balance between the advantages and disadvantages as soon as possible.
Hello, "cutie pie". I read your essay and I like it. You have linking words and academic dictionary. However, you have little mistakes, to:
Delete1. Second sentence in first paragraph: In the past people’s knowledge of something outside their country seemed incredible, nevertheless right now people know a lot of about planets except Earth, too.
2. Please, put coma after linking words (However)
3. More about space is not only beneficial, but also useful - More about space is useful.
4. Is gaining popularity nowadays – gaining popularity today
5. Quite actual – quiet real
6. That it Space – that space.
Nowadays, science and technology are developing so rapidly, a lot of discoveries such as artificial intelligence, augmented reality not surprise people, but news about space and universe people are waiting with enthusiasm. Space and aliens are interesting for me as well as for anyone else. I think that life exists elsewhere in the universe because there are many galaxies and planets that have not been explored yet. Recently NASA noticed signal and in their opinion, it was made by someone. Moreover, I believe that we will meet life out of the Earth before long and probably these creatures look like people. If I had a chance to ask them questions, I would ask like “where are you living?”, “who are you?” and “how you identified the Earth?” There are a lot of movies and books where humanity fights with aliens. However, there would not be any problems and war if aliens came to Earth, because we will find the mutual language and live peacefully, but perhaps it will not so. However, in my opinion, we must continue to explore the spaces thus discovering and learning new.
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DeleteHello, TheKing.
DeleteThis is an excellent piece of writing. However, I think there may be some mistakes in your work. For example, I assume that you should put comas after word "Recently", "thus". Also I think that "explore the spaces"-explore the space would be more correct
Thank you!
Through the centuries science and fiction moved together as closely interconnected entities which heavily inspired one another, and one, eventually, became another. Because of this trend in this fields of human knowledge on of the most interesting and enigmatic question has been asked: “Are we here alone?”, and silence of distant stars was our answer.
ReplyDeleteAliens have evolved in our imagination from slightly different humans to omnipotent godlike creatures, but we still don’t have any idea what they actually are and is there any of them. We simply have no readings from space that can even remotely look like signals of civilized society which in period of billions of years should have been everywhere, but we see none of them. However, there is F. Drakes’ equation which estimates rough number of civilizations in universe, and this number is so big that in the least favorable variant there should be more than a thousand civilizations in Milky Way itself. The probability of being not alone is higher than chances of loosing in a lottery, yet we still drawing an unfortunately fortunate ticket. Even so, we hope that eventually the contact will be established, and game will be forever change its rules.
During contact many questions would be asked by both sides. Personally, I would ask them to reveal their intentions, because so many times lack of this simple question had led to terrible events. Secondly, I would ask them to exchange scientific data unless they would ask that first, so I would want to ask them what is main points of their culture, ethics and morals. And, thirdly, I would ask them to explain how they think and what drives them on their path. Although this would be simplest part, due to Murphys’ law something would probably go wrong.
Having representative of other species on human planet is not the greatest of ideas. Even though this would be great achievement it is very dangerous and irresponsible from our side, and this proofed by historical examples. We already been aliens for other humans in Americas since Europeans came there and this had not turned out well for both sides of the contact, so that one side was almost decimated and other got a lot of diseases and ended poorly as well. Alien biology is supposed to be different to us in indescribable way, so much so we have no idea what would warped with us or them in so dangerous environment which kills thousand monthly. And this is only small portion of actual picture that is alien contact may cause which can be not only exchange with germs, but with nukes as well.
In conclusion, aliens are so desperately desired by humankind, but silent to us or even nonexistent at all, but we keep our hope to meet them one day to answer and ask questions, understand each other and become more than we have been before. And because of that we need to push our boundaries forward and explore the great unknown we call space.
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DeleteThe existence of alien life is one of the most current and interesting topics of modern science. Many theories and surveys are made and now I would like to discuss on this topic.
ReplyDeleteWe believe that the universe is endless, so the probability of alien life is high enough. Even if we say that the appearance of life on the planet is the result of the coincidence of multiple factors, with endless variations of solar systems there is almost 100% chance to life appearance.
So, when we believe that aliens exist, what would we like to ask them? I would ask three questions. Firstly, what is the situation on their planet? Secondly, how long does their civilization last? And in the end, what could they teach us?
But, it is not necessary that the alien is friendly. What if the aliens are our enemies? In my mind, humanity should consider all options of meeting aliens. Alien life may be technological developed than the Earth, so it will be the situation when Americans met Europeans and have been destroyed.
In the conclusion, I want to say that the alien life exists and the meeting with them can give us countless opportunities and also be our end.
I think that it would be better if you replaced word "But" with "However" in sentence "But, it is not necessary that the aliens exist,..." for the reason that it is not correct to start sentence with words "but" and "and", then you usually do not need a comma after "but"
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ReplyDeleteIn our days space exploration is one of the widely researched subject as the exploration of land and ocean.Our space is infinity large so there are an infinite number of galaxies,stars and planets.Therefore, some of scientist think that, in space there may be another planet with life like us.So,are the life in other planets?
ReplyDeleteI think that if we have so many planets and galaxies there can be another planet with life.
People calls them “aliens”.In all ages, people who believe in the existence of aliens have written a lot of books about it. In their books, they imagined what it would be like if alien arrived on the earth. Ones in their books made aliens angry and trying to take over our planet ,others were friendly and described the friendship between them and people.
If i had chance to ask them some question,firstly i would ask What they eat? I think it will be a big problem, if they prefer to eat people's meat).Secondly, it will be:where are they from? Thirtly,why did they came?
Of course, there may be some problems if aliens come to Earth.
So,time will tell if they are good or bad for us.
Hello HappyChemist ! You have some problems with your grammar. However, I want to say that your quetions are not logical correct. For example, you 3rd question is excess. Then your 1st question is also strange, because if they need something they will get it without your questions. Also, I advice you to ask questions that requires the full answer
DeleteGood Luck!
Very good structure.I think you can make the idea more interesting.Good luck!
DeleteHello!
DeleteYour essay is reeally interesting, but you have little mistakes:
"researched subject"-"researched subjects"
"space is infinity large" - "infinitely large" and put comma after that
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ReplyDeleteNowadays science is upgraded, but scientists can't answer to the question how big is the universe ?
ReplyDeleteJudging by the distances between planets, stars and systems like solar system is growing we know that space is expanding, but we don’t know where is the center and where is the border of the space, because we haven’t enough knowledge and technologies to learn it. The last and main question is does life exist elsewhere in the universe?
Even if we don’t know where is the end of space we can see the signs of life another than people. For example we can say about UFO. Many people says that UFOs are not UFO, they are just secret kind of plane that made by organizations like Pentagon which uses for military targets. Also there are many scientists who refutes this interpretations. In my mind aliens or UFO are exists in the universe, because from the point of view of logic the absence of form of life besides people in this infinitive universe is imposible. I think may be they are , too, are trying to find other forms of life just like us or they are exploring us through a UFO and trying to contact us.If one day i met them i would ask them three questions. First I would ask them do they want to conquer the earth. Second I would ask them can they solve ecological problems of our planet. Third I would ask them does our universe has the borders. Many people think that if aliens come to the earth it can be a conflict between humanity and aliens, but I don’t think so. Humanity interests in aliens but don’t want to conquer with them. That’s why I think aliens are too interests in humankind and don’t trying to start war with us.
1)It will be full stop after "growing"
Delete2)to learn it-to discover it,to know about it
3)You forget commas in some cleft and conditional sentences
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ReplyDeleteAre we alone in the universe?
The likelihood of life on other planets is determined by the scale of the universe.That is, the larger the universe, the greater the likelihood of random occurrence of life somewhere.
Our universe is too massive.There are many unexplored places where can be forms of life. Scientists cannot disclaim the existence of life on other planets.I cannot be sure, however, I cannot deny the fact of other forms of life in our universe.
If they exist I would be happy to communicate with them.If I get the opportunity to meet them, I will ask some questions which are too intriguing for me.First, I will ask about their planet, nature and lifestyle. My second question will be about planets and galaxies where can be new forms of life. I hope that creatures from another galaxy should have information about it. I will be glad to know a lot about “our friends” from another galaxy.
But, what if they come without good intentions. Can there be any problems with the alien’s visiting? This is a main question which disturbs me. In my opinion, if aliens came to Earth, we will have ability to improve our science and technologies. We will learn new skills and life secrets. It is nice chance to make our lifestyle more developed.
Very good essay!
DeleteDon‘t forget about commas in some sentences!
DeleteAfter watching the movie “skyline” I seriously thought about life on other planets. Then I learned that in addition to us in the universe there may be other inhabitants of other planets , but the chances of living are very few and has some requirements.On another planet will be life if it will be similar to planet Earth.The first and most obvious terrestrial physical condition is gravity. To gravity on another planet will be exactly the same, it will need exactly the same mass and the same radius. For this to be possible, probably another planet must consist of the same elements as the Earth. This is unlikely.If aliens exist , can begin the war between humans and aliens like in a movie . But I think that the existence of aliens is good than bad . We can share resources , experiments and explore space together. It will be interesting story and new life with new friends. Let s imagine aliens flew to us what would you do?I personally would ask if they are divided by nations or a single country that develop together faster than us ,because , I I think that in order to develop quickly you need to unite.In conclusion I want to say that I will be happy if we meet aliens .
ReplyDeleteHello, QwertyX!You have really good ideas and it was very interesting to read your essay! But, it will be better, if you correct your mistakes. In my point of view, you should to change structure of 2nd sentence. I think that it's too long. So, if you make it a bit shorter, the sentence will be clear and more understandable
DeleteGood morning!
DeleteYour essay was written in high level, but there's there's mistake as:
"good than bad" - "better than bad"
1)Use commas in cleft and conditional sentences
ReplyDelete2)"is good than bad" the strange sentence and meaning
Nowadays, we have explored a space almost 0.01% out of 100%. Space is unpredictable and out of our mind. We can not just fly away from Earth atmosphere and start explore mysterious as well as breathtaking space. Thanks to space we have access to the world wide web, also we have access to versatile channels which we can watch on TV too. Universe is infinite and ever expanding, wherein bending a time as well as a area of space. I think that in Universe have no any life else how we can explain that “aliens” still did not came to our planet. Second one is theory about life is exist in Universe, but their do not evolve to a new degree of development which give them occasion to explore other planets where they can find out a life such as out Earth. If they will came I would asked them questions like:
ReplyDelete“How you can found this planet?”, “Have Universe other life forms?” , “What is your goal in exploring space(colonize)?”
I think that they(aliens) have evil plans about colonize Earth as well as other planets from Solar System. Yeah, we will have some issues after this meeting. However, they can help us to develop and give some advice
To be continued…
Dear Hames,
DeleteI read your essay and I liked it very much. You described the Universe in details. However, I have some suggestions for you:
1) I think something wrong with this phrase-"Space is...out of our mind". Could you kindly explain it to me?
2) "...we have access to the world wide web, also we have access to versatile channels..."- In my opinion, you have to avoid repeating same words and structure of sentence.
3) "How you can found this planet?"- it is question with 'can', therefore you must use verb in infinitive form. I wanted to give you advice: just look through the structure of sentences with modal verbs.
Good luck, Hermes!
Since the human race broadened their understanding of Universe and started think we are not alone in the world, they seeks to answer to question: "Is there life outside of Earth?". And I am not exception.
ReplyDeleteUniverse is boundless and endless, I have not the foggiest idea what it can include. It goes wihout saying that we are exploring the space, but actually we do not know anything about it. Therefore, I can not deny thing I do not know and face. Especially, aliens.
If I meet aliens, I think, my first question will be basic and predictible. "Where are you from?"- question its answer I exactly do not demand, however it is just my curiousity. But other than that, I keep in my mind one outstanding challenge:" Have aliens figured out the origin of life?" In my opinion, knowledge about who we are will turn our living. Also, I would ask them to show me their planet in order to experience a thrilling adventure!
It is really hard to imagine and predict aliens's intention, however it depends on us what attitude we will establish. So, if there are right connect and sympathy, humankind will be in safety and will not wait danger from aliens if they come.
From the first days of humankind, people began to be very interested in space and aliens. With the advent of the first telescopes, people have been tracking space for over 1000 years. But even now, when astronomy has reached unprecedented heights, we still cannot say for sure: Do aliens exist?
DeleteAt the moment, life on Earth is the only known life in the universe, but there are compelling arguments to suggest we are not alone. Indeed, most astrophysicists accept a high probability of there being life elsewhere in the universe, if not on other planets or on moons within our own solar system. The numbers are, well, astronomical: If the count of planets in our solar system is not unusual, then there are more planets in the universe than the sum of all sounds and words ever uttered by every human who has ever lived. To declare that Earth must be the only planet in the cosmos with life would be inexcusably egocentric of us.
From the 1940s people "began to find" strange flying objects in the sky, better known as UFOs. At one time, UFOs became a cult among conspiracy therapists and among thousands of schoolchildren and ordinary people. However, no alien life has yet been seen. Dozens of films were created, new cinema universes were created, hundreds of books were written, but all of them are just the imagination of filmmakers and the utopian world of writers.
Yeah, i can not say for sure that aliens doesn’t exist, furthermore, nobody can’t. There are too many questions about our universe. Now, scientists can’t give right answer about existence of aliens too. If the best scientists do not have proof of the existence of aliens, then I see no reason to believe the opinion of conspiracy therapists. Рerhaps in the distant future, humankind will still manage to find a trace of another life. For now, aliens are just big riddle for us.
Hello, fabulous Angela! Your idea is clear, but you have some little mistakes.
ReplyDelete"Universe" - "the Universe"
"they seeks"-"they seek"
"exception" - "an exception"
"wihout" - "without"
"predictible" - "predictable"
"curiousity" - "curiosity"
Most of them were related to spelling, tenses and articles.
My darling lazypotato, thank you very much! I will be more carefully next time!
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DeleteDoes life exist elsewhere in the Universe? It is one of the interesting and important questions for humanity. Some people sure that we are not alone in this Universe, whereas other part think that it is impossible.In this essay, I will discuss about aliens, who are also known as UFOs.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, the life exists elsewhere in our Universe, because there are some facts which prove this fact. For instance, there are the millions of planets and stars in the galaxy. And about 80-90 percents of them are not explored and learnt by humans. Thus,it is possible that there might be the life at least on one planet. That is why we can not disprove
the possibility of the existence of "foreigners". Furthermore, aliens may be watching us using their high developed technologies while humanity is trying to find an answer to the question that I have mentioned.
So UFOs may visit the Earth at any time. If aliens come to the Earth, I will ask them some questions.Firstly,"Where do you live?". Secondly,"How had you hide from us for a long time?". Thirdly,"Do you have high developed technologies?". However, I could ask the questions,only if there would not be any problems due to aliens. I think there may be a war between humanity and UFOs which may lead to several issues such as health and ecological problems. But,on the other hand, aliens may help us to develop our civilization.
So,on balance, I believe that humans could answer the main question in the near future. But now we are able to just make predictions about the existence of the life elsewhere in the Universe.
Our Universe is very big. We are the smallest part of it. Have you ever thought about another life existing elsewhere in the Universe?
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of planets and Galaxies in the Universe. Nowadays there are many facts, evidences which proves the existence of an aliens. Despite their existence, they do not contact with us. If I meet aliens, I will ask them 3 questions. Firstly, why they left signs,sometimes showed themselves to us, but did not contact? Secondly, what is the purpose of their visit to our planet? Thirdly, how many planets with life exist in the Universe?
We are not alone in the Universe. I think people are ready to contact with aliens. Contacting with aliens will help the development of our planet.
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ReplyDeleteThe Universe is such a mysterious place. People explored less than the 1 percent of the space, that’s why we don’t really know for sure that we are alone in the gigantic Universe. I truly believe that different civilizations are existed somewhere in the Universe.
ReplyDeleteIf I would meet aliens, I would like to ask, first of all, the description of life on their planet. I want to know how is the life are different and similar to ours. Secondly, what kind of technologies did they use to reach Earth, because travelling in space takes millions years. The third one, what are goals of aliens to visit Earth.
There would be some problems if aliens came to Earth to conquer it. A big war between humanity and aliens could start. That’s why we should develop new technologies and explore the space.