Task 1 Version 3 Improved Essays only

You can post your improved essays under this thread if you published your Task 1 Version 2 essay. You must obtain permission to post here directly if you did not post Version 2. Remember to comment on each other's essays. The comments are not as many as expected.

Task 1 Version 2 Improved Essays only

You can post your improved essays under this thread. Be careful to take into account the advice shared under the essays in the previous thread. I look forward to reading your writings, my brilliant students.

Welcome and rules

Welcome to the 'Let us learn English together' blog. It has been set up so that you may post your creative writing in order for your peers and instructors to provide you with constructive feedback. You can then improve your draft and repost it for further comments. You will do this many times. When an instructor is satisfied that your writing is of acceptable quality you will recieve a go ahead to carry out the next writing task.

The rules of blogging here are:

1. Bloggers must remain completely anonymous. Only the instructors will know the identities of bloggers.
2. All communication must be respectful. Treat each other with courtesy.
3. Every blogger must post their personal writings only. Copying and pasting other people's work as your own is not allowed. If you use other people's words, you have to state so.
4. All bloggers must comment constructively on the work of other bloggers.
5. Questions related to the topic are greatly encouraged.

I look forward to your active involvement on this blog.

Sarsenbayeva Nagima Kenzhabekovna
English Language Teacher
Grade 8, 2016-2017
Nazarbayev Intellectual School of
Physics and Mathematics, Taraz
Kazakhstan